The amazing story

 We have been learning to use descriptive language to make our characters come alive. They make our story more interesting for the audience. We also used a comic strip to help tell our story once we had finished writing it.

Writing the story was really fun I liked working with my friend to make my writing more interesting we came up with lots of really good descriptive words 

What do you think of my story did I do a good job of describing my character? Have you got any great tips as to how I could make my writing better? 

My amazing story

We have been learning to use descriptive language in our writing. This makes our stories more interesting for the reader. We also learned to tell our story using a comic strip. I used Pixton to create mine. 

 

I really like learning about using descriptive language to help tell my story. When my friends read it they thought it was much more interesting. 

What do you think of my comic? Does it tell a good story?