We have been learning to use descriptive language to make our characters come alive. They make our story more interesting for the audience. We also used a comic strip to help tell our story once we had finished writing it.
Writing the story was really fun I liked working with my friend to make my writing more interesting we came up with lots of really good descriptive words
What do you think of my story did I do a good job of describing my character? Have you got any great tips as to how I could make my writing better?
